As you all probally know Father's Day was on the 4th of September this year and we also know all our Dads are very very special to every each and one of us. In Gri11 2.0 this last week we had to write a Description, a Procedure or a Recount. I did a Description, and here it is. Hope you enjoy my piece of writing.
My Dad is the best Dad in the world, I know the some people just say that but I really mean that. I really love my Dad because he is just like a perfect stack of pancakes, a perfect Dad. He was the one who taught me how to play badminton and table tennis .My Dad is not like any Dad in the world every Dad in the world is special to their kids, and my Dad is special to me. Just like how important food is to me.
To me my Dad is as soft as flour. He is a amiable and loving Dad. When he is teaching me my percentages and fractions or my proper strokes to my calligraphy words. He always so patient with me even if I don't get it in like 2 years he will still keep trying to teach me.
My Dad is sweet like sugar. You don't have a perfect stack of pancake when they aren't sweet. My Dad is sugar because… well he sweet. He is sweet because he is always really kind to me. Yes sometimes he does get mad. But most of the time he is really sweet, just like sugar.
When you mix baking powder with a substance with acid in it. The acid makes the baking powder it goes all fizzy, Bubbly. Just like my Dad. He has such a bubbly personality.
Milk. I love drinking milk, just like how I love my Dad, and I know that he loves me back. I love all the things about of my Dad. From his humor and his terrible Dad jokes to his love for our family.
There is no way my Dad is salty or buttery. My Dad is the best Dad in the world seeing him everyday is the best thing ( plus Mum )
I love eating eggs and so does my Dad. When I'm eating or thinking of eggs. I think of my Dad. As if he is there eating with me.
When the pancakes are sunny golden-brown then you have some perfect pancakes. While I have a perfect Dad.
To the most loving Dad in the world.
Love, Ivy
Wow Ivy that was so nice of you to say all those lovely things about your dad. The Treehouse have been learning about using similes in our writing too. We could find lots of them in yours. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteYour dad will love that writing #love it
ReplyDeleteLove from Caitlyn